Pollution-Draft 1
What's the biggest problem in the world? That is pollution! There are many kinds of pollution in our everyday life. Such as air pollution, water pollution,radiation pollution, and so on. What would these pollution cause? They would let crops poison, the ozonosphere broken and the most serious is greenhouse effect! If we dont do any effort for our world, the earth will be ruin! So we must put into effects for our surroundings. What can we do to preserve the environment? We can save energy. How to do? First, we can turn off the lights before we leave a room. Second, we should ride bicycle or walk instead of driving, and use the air conditioner only when is really needed. In addition, we can also do recycling. If we can certainly accomplish these gists, our nature will be more beautiful! To protect our earth, we must act quickly.

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"If we dont do any effort for our world, the earth will be ruin!"
The "dont" should change to "don't".
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"the earth will be ruin" the "ruin" should change to "ruined".
"we can also do recycling" the"recycling" should change to
"recycle".
*If we dont do any effort for our world, the earth will be ruin!*
dont should change to don't.
*the earth will be ruin* should change to ruined.
*How to do?* could change to *what to do* or *how to do it*.
"If we don't do any effort for our world," "do" should change into "make".
"and use the air conditioner only when is really needed." may change into " and use the air conditioner only when it is really needed."
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