To Have A Narrow Escape Draft 2

Yesterday afternoon, there were some little boys playing in the park. A boy whose name was Tom, he climbed up a tree for fun. Everything was fine at that time. Suddenly, Tom fell from the tree, and he fell into the jar which was filled with water. Tom was too short to escape from the jar. Oh my god! He was almost going to drowned! Other children were frighten, they yelled "Help! Help! Somebody help us!". Fortunately, there were two boys heard their call. They shifted a big stone, and threw it to break the jar. As they threw, the jar was broken, and the water was flowed out of the jar at the same time. Finally, Tom was saved by the two valiant boys. This story tells us : we should notice that whether the place we play is secure or not.