A Day I'll Never Forget Draft-2

This is an experience that I'll never forget. In a usual day at night, everything was fine, and I was watching my favorite programs. I was watching the most splendid part of the movie when the phone rang. I answered the phone, there was a man's voice said “your father had a car accident! Go to the XX hospital immediately!" Then he hung up the phone right away without letting me say any word. Though my dad was not at home, I thought that was a scam phone and I didn't think too much. Ten minutes later, the man called again shutting" What are you doing? Your father injures serious! Go to the hospital quickly." At this time I wondered maybe it was true, my dad really hurt! I became panic calling my mom told her what happened; she said that she would come back soon. As we went to the hospital, I heard a man shrieked unhappiness, and his scream was just the same as my dad's. We walked to the sickbed discomfort able seeing who he was. To our surprise, that just a man whose name was the same as my dad's name! The feeling for now is like all kinds of feelings well up in my heart. The great fortune of the misfortune is my dad was safe.

A Day I'll Never Forget Draft-1

This is an experience that I'll never forget. In a usual day at night, everything was fine, and I was watching my favorite programs. I was watching the most splendid part of the movie when the phone rang. I answered the phone, there was a man's voice said “your father had a car accident! Go to the XX hospital immediately!" Then he hung up the phone right away without letting me say any word. Though my dad was not at home, I thought that was a scam phone and I didn't think too much. Ten minutes later, the man called again shutting" What are you doing? Your father injures serious! Go to the hospital quickly." At this time I wondered maybe it was true, may dad really hurt! I became panic calling my mom told her what happened; she said she will come back soon. As we went to the hospital, I heard a man shrieked unhappiness, and his scream was just the same as my dad's. We walked to the sickbed discomfort able seeing who he was. To our surprise, that just a man whose name was the same as my dad's name! The feeling for now is like all kinds of feelings well up in my heart. The great fortune of the misfortune is my dad was safe.