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TV Programs
It is important to choose TV programs carefully. Though TV is the most important channel to survice imformation and entertainments, it may have some defects. Some programs which are full of violence and lust do harm to teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV will also hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should chose TV programs which are good for your body and mind. The most important thing is that do not be a couch potato.
Computers
Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can not only help students hand in homework quickly but also help people send messages in time. As long as you turn on the computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself, don't sit too long in front of computers. Most parents do not like their kids depend on computers too much. Especially waste time to discuss in BBS.

Translation Draft-1

TV Programs
It is important to chose TV programs carefully. Though TV is the most important channel to survice imformations and entertainments, it may has some defects. Some programs which are full of violence and lust do harm to teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV will also hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should chose TV programs which are good for your body and mind. The most important thing is that do not be a couch potato.

Computers
Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can not only help students hand in homeworks quickly but also help people send messages in time. As long as you turn on computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself, don't sit too long in front of computers. Most parents do not like their kids depend on computers too much. Aspecially is wasting time discussing in BBS.

To Have A Narrow Escape Draft 2

Yesterday afternoon, there were some little boys playing in the park. A boy whose name was Tom, he climbed up a tree for fun. Everything was fine at that time. Suddenly, Tom fell from the tree, and he fell into the jar which was filled with water. Tom was too short to escape from the jar. Oh my god! He was almost going to drowned! Other children were frighten, they yelled "Help! Help! Somebody help us!". Fortunately, there were two boys heard their call. They shifted a big stone, and threw it to break the jar. As they threw, the jar was broken, and the water was flowed out of the jar at the same time. Finally, Tom was saved by the two valiant boys. This story tells us : we should notice that whether the place we play is secure or not.

To Have A Narrow Escape Draft 1

On yesterday afternoon, there were some little boys playing in the park. A boy whose name was Tom, he climbed up a tree for fun. Everything was fine. Suddenly, Tom fell from the tree, and he fell into the jar which was filled with water. Tom was too short to escape from the jar. My god! He was almost drowned! Other children were frighten, they yell "Help! Help! somebody help us!". Fortunately, there were two boys heard their call. They shift a big stone, and threw it to break the jar. As they threw, the jar was broken, and the water was flowed out of the jar at the same time. Finally, Tom was saved by the two valiant boys. This story tell us : we should notice that whether the place we play is secure or not.

Tips for Staying Healthy - Draft 2

What's the best way to stay healthy? And why do some people in the world can be so macrobiotic? That's because they have good existences. Here are some tips. First of all, they do exercise regularly instead of staying at home to have nothing to do. Taking exercise every day can not only eliminate pressure but also train our body. Second, we should have more vegetables than meat. It can help us turn down the occurrence of the cardiovascular disease. Third, to have a normal lifestyle is important. Like getting up early, don't stay up too late and so on. Having good living habits can make us happy and full of energy. At the end, being healthy is very important. You should follow the tips on the top, so you can be in good health.