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TV Programs
It is important to chose TV programs carefully. Though TV is the most important channel to survice imformations and entertainments, it may has some defects. Some programs which are full of violence and lust do harm to teenagers. Spending too much time watching TV will also hurt your eyesight. Therefore, we should chose TV programs which are good for your body and mind. The most important thing is that do not be a couch potato.
Computers
Computers play an important role in our everyday life. It can not only help students hand in homeworks quickly but also help people send messages in time. As long as you turn on computer, you will fall in love with it. However, be sure to remind yourself, don't sit too long in front of computers. Most parents do not like their kids depend on computers too much. Aspecially is wasting time discussing in BBS.
posted by Fanny @ 8:19 PM
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7 Comments:
"It is important to chose TV programs carefully. "
"chose" should write "choose".
"survice imformations " should write "service information".
"Aspecially is wasting time discussing in BBS." should change to "Especially waste time to discuss in BBS." is better.
"Computers--It can not only help students hand in homeworks quickly but also help people send messages in time.""homeworks" should change into "homework".
"it may has some defects." change into "it may have some defects."
Both computers and TV is important in our life.
*It is important to chose TV programs carefully.* should change to *It is important to choose TV programs carefully.*
It's important for us to use computer and TV.But we have to be careful about that.
"As long as you turn on computer,...." should add "the" in front of computer, or you can use plural.
Choosing good TV programs is good for our bodies and mind.
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