Wednesday, May 23, 2007

Computers Draft 1

Computers are playing an important role in our everyday life. They have already been widely used in everywhere. We use them to search the Internet for some information and watch news. We can gain knowledge through the Internet. We can also use them to listen to music, watch films, play games, even we can go shopping. Furthermore, we can use them to communicate with people on line by use MSN, E-mail or chatroom. As we may learn from the fact here that without computers, this world would simply beyond your imagination.

Privately, I have a liking for computers. Leaining how to use computers is very easy, so I like to use computers. It's very convenient to search for information, it's very banausic. In my leisure time, I like to use computers to chat people online or play games. Computers have become one of our daily necessities. I can't imagine how could we live without computers.

6 Comments:

At 7:07 AM, Blogger 娜娜 said...

*In my leisure time, I like to use computers * can change to *In my leisure, I like to use computers *

 
At 10:55 PM, Blogger Jenny said...

"I can't imagine how could we live without computers." should change into "I can't imagine how we could live without computers."

 
At 4:20 AM, Blogger Dora said...

"Leaining how to use computers is very easy"--> "Leaining" should write "Learning".

"I like to use computers to chat people online or play games."-->write "I like to use computers to chat with people online or play games." is better.

 
At 8:15 AM, Blogger 美萱 said...

"We can also use them to listen to music, watch films, play games, even we can go shopping." -->"We can also use them to listen to music, watch films, play games, even go shopping."
" we can use them to communicate with people on line by use MSN, E-mail or chatroom." -->" by MSN, E-mail or chatroom."
"Leaining how to use computers is very easy," -->"Learning"

 
At 7:04 AM, Blogger Phoebe Lee said...

".....to chat people online..."
should change into "chat with people"

"Computers have become one of our daily necessities."這段說的是你個人的看法,所以our要改成my

 
At 8:20 PM, Blogger candy said...

computers really become the important role in our daily life.

 

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