Autobiography Part2 - Draft1
I study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language. When I was in junior high school, I took up the position of consulting monitor. In this duty let me knew that people must be sincere to other people. I was ember of corus, in this club I learned the unity is the strength. In senior high, I was requested to improve my English and oral skill. For example, writing, listening, speaking, reading. I also passed the GEPT test. I submited the essay and I got second place. Everyday I am very fulfill.
In the future, I hope that I can enter a good university after I graduate from senior high. In order to reach this goal I have to study harder and harder. I have to try my best to improve my English abilities. Practice makes perfect!

5 Comments:
"I study in National Tainan Commercial Vocational Senior High School, and I chose the Department of Applied Foreign Language."時態怪怪的!
You can accomplish your goal.
"I submited the essay and I got second place.""submited" should change to "submitted".
I agree with you. Practice makes perfect perfect!
"I was requested to improve my English and oral skill. For example, writing, listening, speaking, reading. " change to "I was requested to improve my English and oral skills, for example, writing, listening, reading, speaking.
You must can enter your desirable.
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